Group+4

Group 4﻿: Environment

5/11/11 PPP draft

presentation outline:

Were doing great you guys, I'm so proud of us so far..we just have a little more to go then were done! Keep up the good work. I'm about to turn in the second draft and there's so much improvement. -Capri

Here's the second draft, it's on gmail too but the gmail was acting up so just in case i have it on here.







__**JASMINE:**__ __**(**undecided over topic)__ __US violation: 4, 5, 9__

Capri has no articles, because the articles are basically for rights of the people and environment is on another level. The environment is affected by the people, but I'm having a hard time connecting the articles to the topic.

__** KAYLA: **__ __**- Articles:**__ __US Violation: 2, 3, 5, 7, 16__ __Apply to topic (Environment): 3, 5, 13, 14, 15, 25__

__If were still doing Environment for our topic, I was thinking instead of doing the usual 'global warming' idea, maybe we could focus in on more interesting topics like, whaling, and the killing of dolphins? since its a important issue going on right now around the globe. Especially in Japan.__

__- **Links about whaling & dolphin slaughtering:**__

__- **Whale wars, Sea Shepherd website:**__ __http://www.seashepherd.org__
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__- **Video clip from the movie, The cove. Dolphin slaughtering in Japan:**__ __[]__







CAPRI
US violation: 3,4,7,9

__*Update on February 3: Added the explanation for the Topic selection and the Project bulilding section and came up with more questions (Jas has it on her laptop). __

__ Here's some sources we can go to for further research: __ __-[|whaling]__ __-[|Japan's whaling]__ __-[|Demark's killing of dolphins and whales]__ __-[|WHY killing of W&D is murder]__ __-[|Youtube Videos]__ __-[|A man bringing attention to Japan (video)]__ __-[|Iceland massacre(video)]__ __-[|South Korea(video)]__ __-[|european countries eating whale youtube videos]__ __-[|japanese whaling article 2wps]__ -[|list of nations against whaling]

__I found on this [|youtube video] an interesting point of view that one of the commenters made:__ __-"tbh, u could look at it in all angles....yep, the japs are sick for doing this but have u ever seen how countries slaughter what we call 'standard meat' i.e. beef, chickens etc...In india they would﻿ call this sick/inhumane i.e. killing a cow etc...its all just cultural differences and all countries are﻿ f_ up!" __

CAPRI'S WORK



citation for it:

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Gutierrez, David. "Japanese Whaling Ship Crew Assaults, Kidnaps Anti-Whaling Activists."// Independent News on Natural Health, Nutrition and More //. 02 Aug. 2008. Web. 01 Mar. 2011. . ===== The start of the 3rd WP 

[|More about spindle cells]

Ethics part of the outline i moved it here jas to make our page look a little neater. haha. JASMINE! please look at this for me, i couldn't open your document so i fixed it on my own. There's no religious part of it, it's all just about how "it's not right." and the spindle cells... so here's what i got!

thats true^^ we could use that in our paper! alrighty, so i edited the proposal, tell me what you think. aand i just realized my dad didnt replae the ink in our printer so im out. so can one of you guys print it out? thaanks
 * JASMINE **

LMK if the document wont open, then i'll just put the whole thing on here instead .. THANKS GUYS:)

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**JASMINE** Here's the timeline:

February 5: Put together our proposal draft, have it done and ready for due date February 11: Write our thesis statement. From now until 2/25 we will watch Whale Wars and The Cove February 25: We want to be complete with all of our research\ March 2: By this date our outline will be out together March 9: We plan to be complete with our introduction March 15: We plan to be complete with our body paragraphs and conclusion (we will put up work on the wiki) March 16: Give a draft of our paper to an English teacher (Wurthner/Marshall) to proofread March 18: Get our proofread paper back from English teacher March 25: We plan to be done with all of our editing from our rough draft April 1: We plan to complete adding and removing additional information from our paper April 18: We plan on completing editing our paper April 26: We plan to map out our ideas on what we want for our presentation May 4: Write out our outline for our presentation, edit, correct, fix, etc. May 9: Begin creating our PowerPoint presentation through the wiki, posting info we want (pictures, videos, speaking parts, etc) May 15: We plan to be complete with our PowerPoint May 16-18:Go over presentation at school and other info we will need clarification with
 * February 7: Proposal due**
 * March 4: Outline due**
 * April 5: Rough Draft due**
 * April 20: Final Draft due**
 * May 6: Presentation Outline due**
 * May 19: Present!**

--- Try find some answers to our question so we can put our thesis together by this friday
 * Research Question:** How do the views of non-participating countries differ from the views of participating countries concerning the situation of killing whales and dolphins?

JASMINE
ARTICLE SUMMARY (WP #1) Social Studies 2/11 ==

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**JASMINE**
ARTICLE SUMMARY (WP #2) Social Stdudies 2/14

[|Sea Shepherd Conservation society]
[|greenpeace] [|groups that help stop whaling]

__**JASMINE**__=== Article summary (WP#3) Social Studies 2/23/11

CAPRI'S THIRD WP ARTICLE [|Whaling ship assults]



Article Summary (WP#4) Social Studies 3/1/11 =
 * __JASMINE__**

//__**OUTLINE**__//=

__**JASMINE**__ "even giants aren't safe" <- thats a good quote, we should use it for our presentation for the whales endangerment status on whales and dolphins

http://www.climate.org/topics/ecosystems/whales-endangered-climate-change.html http://www.earthdive.com/site/news/newsdetail.asp?id=1993 http://www.dolphins.org/marineed_threatstodolphins.php http://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2010/03/26/entertainment/main6334890.shtml < hayden panettiere article on dolphins http://www.allpics4u.com/bizarreoddities/innocent-dolphins-denmark-shame.html < images of slaughtered dolphins http://www.facebook.com/pages/Stop-Whaling-and-Killing-Dolphins-Boycott-Japanese-Products/122264391148584< "like" page on facebook healthbuffboy.blogspot.com/.../denmark-**dolphin**-**killing**-festival.html http://bluepanjeet.net/2008/11/22/1594/the-horrible-whale-and-dolphin-massacre-tradition-of-faroe-islands-in-denmark/ http://factsanddetails.com/japan.php?itemid=879&catid=26&subcatid=164 http://www.suite101.com/content/the-whaling--dolphin-drive-debate-a215960

http://www.wdcs.org/

__**KAYLA**__

More info on dolphins: http://www.seashepherd.org/news-and-media/news-051219-1.html http://savejapandolphins.org/blog/post/an-early-end-to-japans-whaling-season-and-what-it-means-for-dolphins

Video: http://savejapandolphins.org/blog/post/dolphin-friends

OKAY SO HERE'S THE UPDATED OUTLINE FROM CAPRI: 3/14/11

MOST RECENT OUTLINE 3/29/11


 * as of 3/29/11:**

kay i looked through the outline and sorted out the different topics for our paper. this is how its gonna look like:

intro: **capri** ethics -purposes: Capri - people who participate: **capri** - spindle cells: **capri** **-Tsunami affects : capri** ** - our responsibility: **jasmine activists - hayden panetierre: **jasmine** - killing is a moral crime: **jasmine** - IWC conference: **jasmine** - scientific research: **kayla** double standards on dolphins - defending dolphins: **kayla** - cultural traditions: **kayla** - america double standard: **kayla** -japanese allows: Capri effects on ecosystem - whales&climate change: **jasmine** - krill population: **jasmine** awarness - tv show, whale wars: kayla - movie, the cove: kayla conclusion: **capri**

there you go, i sorted it all out for you, just pick. remember that it HAS to be 12-15 pages so don't hold back on the information. we need as much as we can get. dont forget your works cited and to reference in the paragraphs too in parenthesis.

theres 18 sections, soo 6 sections each